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this is my animation about hinehakirirangi.
i have been working on this for a while and im pretty proud of it.
Hi Jayden, my name is Isabella and I really liked your animation. I thought the story was interesting about the kumera and I liked how you included our country.
Kia ora. I am Charlie J from St Mary’s School. I really liked that you made the boat move but stopping during the text and made the people move. Maybe try making it so they are building the hut/house. I learnt that I could try make a story about Hinehakirirangi. Maybe you could add more slides to explain the story more and maybe make the boat move during it was talking about Hinehakirirangi. Please visit my blog here
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Hi Jayden, my name is Isabella and I really liked your animation.
ReplyDeleteI thought the story was interesting about the kumera and
I liked how you included our country.
Hey Jaydan, great animation, but try make it autoplay rather than us go through all the pages. Tall tweets will do that for you.
ReplyDeleteKia ora. I am Charlie J from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked that you made the boat move but stopping during the text and made the people move. Maybe try making it so they are building the hut/house.
I learnt that I could try make a story about Hinehakirirangi.
Maybe you could add more slides to explain the story more and maybe make the boat move during it was talking about Hinehakirirangi.
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Charlie